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Portal 2 by Maxx-Marshall Portal 2 by Maxx-Marshall
NOT A REAL COMIC!!! My buddy and I are almost at the end of Portal 2's co-op, so i made a pic for he and i to celebrate...
Portal and Portal 2 pretty much make me laugh out loud. The co-op is epic, because you get to be smarter than your smart friends... unless of course you are the smart friend who is a mental failure during the puzzles... thus, in the words of the Bard, "nah...nah!!!" :)
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Glitzy-Faery Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Just got here from Escher Girls (the post where someone points out that your pic does NOT belong there, the original post was removed).

Now I want a "Cake or GTFO" t-shirt. I mean, right?
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Maxx-Marshall Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Agreed!!! I Love escher girls!!! It's making me a better artist. I do a lot less boob and butt shots because of them. Once I noticed some of the artists I really like on there, I am ok with their critiques, I mean, I'm in good company.
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KikaiSaigono Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Breasts don't work that way and her hips are disconnected from her body. Nice colors though.
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Maxx-Marshall Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, I think if you'd read the posts above you'd see that people've told me this already, even to the point that i'd been placed on a tumblr where wonky anatomy was posted. so... ok, thank you for your two cents and if you'd like to comment on my or any of deviant art's other pieces, feel free... once again, thanks for noticing and the kind words of help.
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ravendark82 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Would totally read a Portal comic. I totally loooooooved the co-op mode, it was an awesome addition.

Your drawing has a lot of energy and is very dynamic. I really love the expression on her face. I do agree with some of the other comments that the pose needs some work. I think if you were to nail down the pose and then throw your awesome colors on top this would be a top-notch piece.
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Maxx-Marshall Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks
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kamalynsky Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think the main issue is that there's a disconnect between her upper and lower body - the hips just don't look like they're attached to the spine. It would actually be pretty easy to fix, though - the front leg needs to be shifted right a bit, and that back leg... currently it forms a right angle with the spine, and that looks pretty uncomfortable. You probably just need to (a) shift it right a bit, then (b) pivot it a bit to change that angle.

That being said, the pose is super dynamic, the the coloring is well done, the little details are great - folds in the cloth, highlights on the skin and hair...the facial expression, and that raised hand... those fingers! I really love that hand. :) You really did a good job for the most part.
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Maxx-Marshall Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
...wait a second. you've been a deviant for SEVEN years... never posted art never posted a comment, in SEVEN YEARS. The first thing you've done to contribute to the site in all this time is dish out loving and logical critique on my art? A. I'm honestly honoured, I'm giddy that my art and my situation was the thing that pulled you out of your deviant shell (Chell?) thank you. B. Please post more I get love letters from artists all the time who ask for critique and help. I do my best to help, but if we had more kids working on helping the artists on these forums to keep things nice and solid, we'd have a much nicer community filled with more art that we could all be proud of and giddy about. I seriously thank you for your first comment and post. (IN SEVEN YEARS!!!) I also ask that you use your beautiful and loving wisdom to help out others as well. Thank you.
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Sotkettu Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Someone featured this at Escher Girls ( Escher Girls is a blog about comic book heroines that have some serious anatomy problems).
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RA-SE-N Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Well, at least here it looks like the artist was actually trying to make Chell look badass instead of needlessly sexed-up, which is more than one can say about most of the professional art on Escher Girls.

Dat Wheatley looks great though.
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